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Sutton Spencer’s ideas for her life were fairly simple: finish graduate school and fall in love. It would be a lot simpler if she could pinpoint exactly what she should do when she graduates in less than a year. Oh, and if she could figure out how to talk to a woman without feeling like a total mess, that would be great too. Charlotte Thompson is very much the opposite. She's always had clear steps outlining her path to success with no time or inclination for romance. Her burgeoning career in politics means everything to her and she’s not willing to compromise it for something as insignificant as love. Fleeting, casual, and discreet worked perfectly fine. When they meet through a dating app, it's immediately clear that they aren't suited for anything more than friendship. Right?

At this time of writing, The Audiobook Those Who Wait has garnered 9 customer reviews with rating of 5 out of 5 stars. Not a bad score at all as if you round it off, it’s actually a perfect TEN already. From the looks of that rating, we can say the Audiobook is Good TO READ!

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First let me say, I try to support Indy writers. Some are good, some not, some fall in-between. As a writer and avid reader, I would encourage this young writer to either take classes to improve her writing skills or hire an editor/proofreader because the mistakes were glaring and distracting. I do want to say I loved the concept for the story and how the women met. I thought it was a great idea, however an idea does not translate into a well written novel. So below is what I found to be disruptive to what could have been an amazing story. And, before I begin my dissection, I hope if this author reads this, she will try to improve as I saw some of the 5 Star rating mention some of the areas I will address.1) The dialogue was too disrupted during most of the book. She'd have the character say something, then go into a tangent of their feelings. Until the other person responded, I'd forget what the original character said. Needed to go back many times to reread - that is something you never want in a book! It makes people put the book down and cross off the author for later books. And others mention this in their reviews. I just feel in her exuberance, the author had a lot to say and got carried away. That would be corrected with an editor or proofreader. There were a few scenes where she didn't do it, particularly between Naomi and Charlotte after the second debate. That was well written. The other dialogue scenes though were painful.2) The novel was highly repetitive not only in sentences and thoughts, but words. If I never again read the line 'she bit her lip,' 'she quirked her brow," 'she tangled her fingers,' etc, I will be happy. Possibly a great exercise for this fledging writer would be to sit down and describe people's body language on a piece of paper. Write all the adjustives there are for how people use their hands, facial expressions, etc. She might find a plethora of other words to use in describing characters actions. Until the end of the novel, I had a vision of Sutton having no lips left from all the times she bit them! It took away from the character to always be entwining her fingers or bushing her hands over her dress. Same with the facial expressions of all the characters.3) The writer was creating a world of a powerful women, Charlotte., but missed the mark because with the descriptive words the writer used, she made her sound much less than she was supposed to be.. Same with Sutton.4) While the book was long and some readers might like that, I find that good story tellers use fewer words to create a compelling world or characters. This avoids repetitive sentences. Also, punctuation desperately needed work as well as how to structure a paragraph. And the emdashes were overly used and not correct in how they were inserted into the sentence. Just do an F'n period and start a new sentence!Lastly, all these mistakes could have been avoided by re-reading, editing, and practice writing away from the story.For me, it made it an unpleasant experience that would make me pass on any additional works by this writer. With that said, the writer did hook me in the 'Look Inside' because she had me asking the important question - what's next? I would strongly encourage this young writer to seek help in becoming a good writer. And that of course is my opinion - take it for what it's worth. I would have loved to give this a higher rating, and seem to be again the general consensus at this point, however, I do believe in reading a well formatted, written book.

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